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Saguarus Ref WIP 2

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The second installment. I think the anatomy is... okay... but the arms look wroooong.

Again, feedback is wanted!

Edit: The gibberish on the left says, "Fha sa asystiq eqigrasen, Qaryseane! Egee ely agraden berdetre!" Translation: Thanks for the help, :iconkarisean:! I really appreciate it!
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Lookin' good! Here's my two cents:

- I think there should be some tail feather showing in between his thighs.
- The right boxer short leg should be a little longer. If his legs were more spread about, the boxer leg would look like that, but were the legs are now, the perspective should make it a tad longer.
- As for what you're talking about involving the arms, I think I know what could aide that. The elbow should meet up about with the belly button. As of right now, the left arm's elbow would land below the belly button. Shortening the upper left arm would help that. The lower left arm is the right size, and the fingers and done great. :D
- The right upper arm could be lengthened, as it's a bit too short.
- The right hand, at the angle it would appear resting on the hips, would be a bit flatter on the hip's shape. Right now, with the finger's cascading, but still adhering to the hip's shape calls for curved fingers. You can add lines where the last knuckles (the one's closest to the nails) are to accentuate the knuckles.

That's all for tips right now. If I didn't explain myself well enough, well, too bad.

Lol, jk. I kid. ;D